Pool lesson-CFNM
Mark & Deb found the perfect house
for them, out in the country, but not too far from town, and with no
next door neighbors although they did have neighbors less than a
quarter mile away. But they felt somewhat free from living in a
downtown apartment and were enjoying their first summer at their new
place.
One of the features they both fell in
love with was a nice pool. It was an above ground pool, 18 by 33
feet, with a deep end and a deck that went all the way around the
pool. They already had pool parties and met some of the neighbors
while doing so.
But Deb was getting a little concerned
at Mark for his night time skinny dipping, and he was getting more
brazen in them. At first he would wait until dark, but lately he had
been going out at dusk, and Deb was afraid that the neighbors would
be able to see him.
Mark scoffed at her concerns and
explained that at that time of the evening it was hard to see any
great distance, and beside that, he always wore his trunks into the
pool before he would remove them and lay them on the deck.
Mark always tried to get Deb to join
him and she sometimes would, but she was more shy than Mark and would
die of embarrassment if someone saw her. She didn't even like Mark
to see her naked, but she did secretly enjoy watching him swim nude,
she just didn't want anyone else to see him.
During the mid part of July, a
heatwave had made it almost unbearable to do anything outside, but
Mark did try to keep up with the yard work and lawn mowing, but
that's when Deb decided she had enough of Mark's skinny dipping and
figured she would teach him a lesson. The reason was that as Mark
finished mowing and put the mower in their shed she saw him stop at
the clothes line and grab his towel. Then he headed for the pool.
It wasn't even dusk yet, and she glanced at the clock, it was 8:20
almost an hour and a half before sunset.
Maybe he's just gonna cool off she
said to herself, but instead of changing into his trunks, Mark took
off his tank top and laid it on the rail of the deck steps, then she
watched as he walked to the edge of the pool and glanced around.
Casually he dropped his cutoffs and jumped naked into the pool.
Deb was angry at his boldness and knew
the time had come to teach him a lesson in modesty. She called two
of her neighbor women and invited them down to swim, telling them it
was a great way to cool off before bed. They both accepted her offer
and said they would be down shortly.
Then Deb walked out to the pool and
nonchalantly watched Mark as his bare butt broke the surface on his
dive to the bottom. When he came up for air he saw her and asked if
she was going to join him.
“Maybe in a little while honey”
she said sweetly, “But not right now.”
“The water is great,” Mark
entreated, “If anything it's a little warm, but I know you prefer
that.”
Deb nodded and smiled and as Mark dove
back under and swam toward the far end of the pool, Deb grabbed his
cutoffs and his towel, and hurried to the deck gate. She grabbed his
shirt as she made her way into the house. She changed into her
swimsuit, turned on the yard light, and grabbed the house key as she
walked out the door. Then she made sure the door was locked as she
waited for her neighbors to get there.
She didn't have to wait long as they
both arrived together. Peggy was the older of the two, mid thirties,
divorced with two teenage kids, Sharron was younger and staying at
her parents house while they traveled after they retired. Both women
were chatting and giggling as they came around the side of the house.
Mark had seen the car coming down the
road, and heard the tires on their driveway. He had swam to the
ladder to get his cutoffs only to find they were gone! He looked at
the chair where he had laid his towel and that was gone too. He
couldn't see Deb from his position in the pool, but he knew she was
behind this, and now he was trapped naked in the pool, still in
daylight, albeit later in the evening.
As the three women climbed the steps
to the deck, Peggy saw Mark and called out a hello. Mark oddly
didn't answer, just nodded. Peggy looked at Sharron and Sharron
looked back at her, something was wrong here, they both thought,
because of the way mark was acting.
“Oh don't mind him,” Deb said, “He
likes to go skinny dipping in the evening,” she told them matter of
factly, “He just doesn't usually have company.”
“Maybe we should go...” Peggy
stammered.
Sharron just stared in stunned
silence, as Mark glared at Deb she smiled and leaned closer to her
friends.
“I want to teach him a lesson about
skinny dipping,” she whispered, “Please stay and help me with
that.”
Sharron wasn't sure what to do, but
Peggy shrugged and said, “Oh hell, I'm game.” and she walked to
the edge of the pool and jumped in. Sharron snapped out of her
stupor and giggled a bit then she too jumped in the pool.
As Deb entered the water she saw Peggy
playfully splashing at Mark, who was clutching both hands over his
groin area for cover. Soon Sharron was joining Peggy as they
splashed water at Mark.
“Don't be shy honey, have fun,”
she said, but she was secretly a bit jealous at the way the two women
were looking at Mark.
Then Peggy pushed Mark toward the deep
end, and Sharron joined her almost immediately, sensing what her goal
was. If they got Mark into the deeper water he would need to use his
hands to swim and couldn't cover himself.
Mark tried to fend them off, but in
doing so he would expose his nudity to them, and with that handicap
he was soon forced into the deep end of the pool where the neighbor
ladies peered through the water to get a good look.
Although this bothered Deb she
pretended not to care, and in an odd way found it erotic, that other
women were enjoying seeing her husband naked. Mark on the other hand
was not enjoying himself at all, and despite his anger at Deb there
was little he could do at the moment.
Peggy and Sharron were keeping him in
the deep end of the pool and he saw no recourse but to try and climb
out to get away from them. He swam to the edge of the pool and as
the women laughed at his awkward attempt to exit the pool, showing
his bare butt and his private parts dangling there for an instant, he
got out and scurried across the deck, again cupping his hands over
his groin.
“Don't bother going in honey,” Deb
called to him, “The house is locked, both the front and back door.”
Mark hesitated just for a moment then
he jumped back into the pool, where he at least had the cover of the
water. Dusk was starting to set in and he thought he might get a bit
more cover when he noticed the mercury light that was high above the
pool coming on. He usually kept it off just so he could swim after
dark, but Deb had thought of this too.
He glared at Deb, but Peggy broke the
silence with a half laughing comment, “Lighten up Mark,” she
said, “It's not anything we haven't seen before.” As she said
this she wasn't sure about Sharron, but she guessed by her early 20's
she had to have seen a few naked men.
“Maybe so, but you haven't seen
mine,” Mark blurted.
“Well we have now,” and even Deb
laughed at that.
“You might as well relax honey,”
Deb said, in a voice that let him know she held the upper hand at the
moment, “You're not getting in the house anytime soon.”
Peggy laughed and added, “Neither
one of us have to work tomorrow either,” “We can stay quite late
if need be.”
They had him over a barrel and he knew
it, there was nothing he could do. He relaxed his hands and started
swimming around, soon they were all playing catch with a beach ball,
and tug of war with a piece of rope.
Even though he was embarrassed for the
most part, Mark too was finding this situation somewhat stimulating,
though he wasn't sure he wanted to go through it again.
The end
I gotta make a long review because I just like your stories so much, you are easily one of my favorite CFNM writers so excuse my wall of text please.
ReplyDeleteIt was amazing stuff, the CFNM aspect was really playful (the whole thing just being a prank Deb played on her husband, and really , they being a married couple makes the whole thing )
Deb doesn’t feel like a mean person, just mischievous, her sweet talking Mark and then stealing his clothes was crazy hot, just as it was her turning on the pool lights so Mark could not find any cover.
Really, the idea of being trapped skinny dipping in front of sexy women in swimsuits is the hottest thing , too bad CFNM authors don'use it as much as they should
Only thing I could suggest would be that Deb gave away mark being Naked too soon, maybe her friends could have jumped straight into the pool surprising the nude Mark, who , embarrassed tries to find cover while Deb drops subtle hints that he is naked, and then he gets found out when Deb gives her friends snorkels and encourages them to go underwater.
Also, Personally I think The ending could have used a little more of a bang, how did that night end? Did they just leave? Did they got him out of the pool somehow? Did one of the girls call even more girls to this CFNM party? The original ending was insanely erotic, with a naked guy being at the mercy of a camera and two clothed girls (thought maybe it was a little too mean , what with them being a married couple now) maybe you could had done something similar, like for example the story ends just as the girls bring out a water-proof camera, or, Deb finds the whole thing so erotic she requests a nude photoshoot of her husband just after they leave, or even if you wanted something different it could have ended with Deb hugging her naked husband and thanking him for the experience.
Still, it was a solid 8/10 , it was just the right mix of cute and sexy , here's hoping you write more and that Deb makes her mission to make her husband skinny dip in front of as many women as possible
As a guy who experienced first hand an interrupted skinny dip, I can tell you it is very intense. I'd like to reveal those real life events that got me into cfnm, but I'm not comfortable posting them in public. Not yet anyway, maybe if I got some private feedback first?
ReplyDeleteHi, I loved the story. I had a quick look at your blog and will definately come back to have more of a look. I regret not coming across it earlier, but I am glad to know about it now. Keep up the good posts!
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